Edit feedback

 We each shared our rough edits and got feedback on our work in order to see the areas we need to improve on, and what ideas were really useful.

We got feedback such as there were moments that were too slow or moments with too many flashes that took away from the video itself.

There was too little moments of the our actress Karla and will ensure to include more of her in the next edit is that our story line is fully understandable. 

We will now create our final piece with our ideas that we each like and write our individual report and peer review.